Thursday, 2 May 2019

LO4 : Subediting


After receiving feedback from my client and then sub editing my article I now know what needs improvements and the strengths of my article.
For my next steps on improving I need to proof check my grammar and ensure that simple punctuation is implace, alongside this I need to change the speech marks and add some more humorous content.
Strengths of the article however is the good gonzo style and strong questions, i'm really happy the client likes these aspects as I think they make the article seem more friendly and informal.

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